Upon reading Plato's Republic The Allegory Of The Cave, I was inspired to write part 2 of this short story. I then wrote part 1, a prequel, followed by part 3, the conclusion. Enjoy all 14,160 words.
Certainly. I also am writing a novel. It’s on a man’s visitation from the celestial realm and learning to value the river of life. The word of God. It was started from a sentence prompt from a writing workshop weekly at church. It morphed into 500 pages. I’m learning a lot from other writers and have begun editing it voraciously. Not sure what to do after that. I will intro to Substack like you have done. Thanks.
Interesting read Jim. Could be a trilogy. Expanded on in each of the stories. Mr Osborne, Echo , then the futuristic reveal. I found the story of Echo the most riveting. It left me thinking of several openings he could find and lead others to the light....
Excellent, Jim. I love your writing style. It hits the mark. Thanks for subscribing to my Substack. Say, you might want to check out my latest book detailing these movements: https://www.iomamerica.net/this-preeminent-darkness
Thanks Jim. Will read. I mostly wrote prose from scripture or from a message. On weekends I have shared a life story. I endeavor to share to maybe make a difference in folks lives.
Certainly. I also am writing a novel. It’s on a man’s visitation from the celestial realm and learning to value the river of life. The word of God. It was started from a sentence prompt from a writing workshop weekly at church. It morphed into 500 pages. I’m learning a lot from other writers and have begun editing it voraciously. Not sure what to do after that. I will intro to Substack like you have done. Thanks.
Interesting read Jim. Could be a trilogy. Expanded on in each of the stories. Mr Osborne, Echo , then the futuristic reveal. I found the story of Echo the most riveting. It left me thinking of several openings he could find and lead others to the light....
Thank you for the "heart" regarding my Ambiguity article. I deeply appreciate your reviews!
Excellent, Jim. I love your writing style. It hits the mark. Thanks for subscribing to my Substack. Say, you might want to check out my latest book detailing these movements: https://www.iomamerica.net/this-preeminent-darkness
Yes, I love your style.
Thanks Jim. Will read. I mostly wrote prose from scripture or from a message. On weekends I have shared a life story. I endeavor to share to maybe make a difference in folks lives.